B2B marketing often takes a “better mousetrap” approach that focuses on why a given offering outperforms the competition. There’s a notion that if a case can be made for a solution using cold logic, devoid of emotional influences, the world will beat a path to your door. We’ll dispute the role of emotion another time (research suggests it’s just as important as in B2C, but let that pass for now). Yet even if we take the traditional B2B stance that side-by-side comparison is where it’s at, a surprising number of organizations seem reluctant to share details that give their claims substance.
Consider the following three statements:
- “The Pizzatastica CLVR™ slices pizza faster.”
- “The Pizzatastica CLVR™ slices pizza up to five times faster than the average pizzeria team member.”
- “The Pizzatastica CLVR™ slices up to five times faster than any other pizza automation solution currently on the market. The unit typically reduces delivery times by as much as 20% within four weeks of installation while virtually eliminating mis-sliced waste, potentially saving owners as much as $50,000 per pizzeria per year.”
If you were in the market for an automated pizza-slicing solution, I’m guessing version 3 would be most likely to attract your interest. Even though it wouldn’t make a great sound bite, this copy will outperform the other examples for two reasons.
First, version 3 is loaded with specifics. The seller’s willingness to share hard numbers implies they know their product inside and out and have tested it thoroughly. It suggests they’re confident in the value it delivers, that it can go toe-to-toe with the competition, that other pizzerias are already using it successfully, and that you’ll enjoy benefits similar to those satisfied customers.
Second, the copy isn’t just a list of statistics. In addition to lending credibility, the details are linked with positive outcomes your own pizzeria is likely to care about: faster delivery, less waste and lower costs. The value of this will depend on how well the company knows their customers. Specifics are good, but details that target your customers’ biggest challenges are better.